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The Pearl  

 

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06/11/2018 9:08 pm  

old brush beggars

looked at shadows.

News of procession

appeared in offices.

Slow waiting death,

sorrow your loss.


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06/11/2018 9:16 pm  

Good poem, I like how your descriptive


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06/11/2018 9:26 pm  

Very good poem it is put together very well and is descriptive.


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09/11/2018 8:29 pm  

I like the poem but I have no idea what it meant or your intention of the poem, 


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