Poetry Forum

Sukany Found Poem - c  

 

Member Admin
Joined: 8 years ago
Posts: 132
06/11/2018 6:26 pm  

Streaming Out

Chaos. They are
so loud
so loud

I remember mom
. . . a black car
Blake yelling
. . . a black four-door

Lost in description:
gray inside
softly imagining
the abduction.

After dark
for days
calling you
but you were
so pissed
so sad

--T.A. Sukany 06 Nov 2018
Found Poem from McMann, Lisa. Dead to You. page 68


Quote
Prominent Member
Joined: 3 weeks ago
Posts: 987
06/11/2018 9:11 pm  

I like it it is very well put into place.


ReplyQuote
Prominent Member
Joined: 3 weeks ago
Posts: 987
06/11/2018 9:24 pm  

It put together so well that it doesn't even sound like a found poem.


editor liked
ReplyQuote
Prominent Member
Joined: 3 weeks ago
Posts: 987
09/11/2018 8:34 pm  

it is vary good and i like your  choose in words


ReplyQuote