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06/11/2018 9:13 pm  

"You're dead, mama," I say.

Lets think.

Maybe I can keep living like this.

"I think about a sweet crap," Cami says softly. 


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06/11/2018 9:25 pm  

The poem looks good to me, but maybe you could put more words in it.


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06/11/2018 9:32 pm  

Add more words to the poem so it would be more interesting 


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09/11/2018 8:36 pm  

it was good. it should be longer, but good job.


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