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Found poem  

 

 bdue
Active Member
Joined: 12 months ago
Posts: 11
06/11/2018 9:07 pm  

Report your brother.

I wouldn't!

Said Doug.

I will

Said grandpa.

Its not usual,

rarely see him.

Any ideas boy?

No, sir.

I hate you,

boy you know!

Add a list,

the ones running.

Ones with firecrackers 

and a match.

Its my business


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Posts: 24
06/11/2018 9:14 pm  

This looks like it came together a lot better than mine did but make it less vertical and more horizontal.


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Posts: 20
09/11/2018 8:32 pm  

This is a cool poem I would honestly get rid of the "blank said" stuff. 


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