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06/11/2018 8:15 pm  

DEAD

Committing something

dying

get a better picture

they are looking at me

asking me simple questions 

there is a lull

racking my brains

starting to sweat

Do you remember it?

some of it

I don't know the dogs name

Rags

was a nice dog


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06/11/2018 8:38 pm  

Nice story line.  Who is the author?


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08/11/2018 7:36 pm  

Nice story but you should rearrange your words 


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09/11/2018 7:39 pm  

 It sounded interesting but i thought that it was a bit confusing.


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13/11/2018 8:16 pm  

nice poem about suicide 🧐 


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