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06/11/2018 7:01 pm  

Stolen in the night, the barking dogs do not sleep soundly.

They listened for creeping, fierce and afraid.

Dug in the dirt, buried and covered up again.

He had buried his last baby and lay him down to sleep.

Taken by;  The Pearl, Author John Steinbeck, Pg. 36


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06/11/2018 7:04 pm  

This is a very interesting poem, great job!


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06/11/2018 9:09 pm  

    A Strong Title will make this poem even stronger.  So good.  Thanks


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08/11/2018 6:35 pm  

I loved it! Great choice of words.


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08/11/2018 6:36 pm  

i love how it almost keeps you hanging but at the same time it very detailed. Great job 


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08/11/2018 6:39 pm  

I loved how well this went together... well done.


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09/11/2018 6:33 pm  

Very good choices of words


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09/11/2018 6:36 pm  

I like the term "He had buried his last baby and lay him down to sleep."


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09/11/2018 6:39 pm  

I like it, the wording is very interesting, great job! 


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09/11/2018 6:41 pm  

good wording


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16/11/2018 6:40 pm  

nice usage of words


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